Slide 3.... more screen grabs needed to support your claim. You will also need to name the artist, track and year of the video. To gain grades A_B you will need to make sense of your findings in terms of audience appeal, demands of the record label and the marketing/ selling of the artist. Also attention to film techniques i.e. how is editing, camera and mise en scene being used. What does Rock/Indie mean? Some narrative? Clear view of instrument. At the moment the content of slide 3 is simply description- which cannot be awarded anything than a grade e/d
Umair you must try and explain the appeal /reason for production choices. Also there is no mention of the genre of folk or it's target audience. Equally, your analyse provides no evidence that you have considered how the video relates back to the genre of folk music or indeed the folk artist on screen. I m pleased that you have attempted to apply Goodwin's theory however your analyse must be much improved
Slide 3.... more screen grabs needed to support your claim. You will also need to name the artist, track and year of the video. To gain grades A_B you will need to make sense of your findings in terms of audience appeal, demands of the record label and the marketing/ selling of the artist. Also attention to film techniques i.e. how is editing, camera and mise en scene being used. What does Rock/Indie mean? Some narrative? Clear view of instrument. At the moment the content of slide 3 is simply description- which cannot be awarded anything than a grade e/d
ReplyDeleteUmair you must try and explain the appeal /reason for production choices. Also there is no mention of the genre of folk or it's target audience. Equally, your analyse provides no evidence that you have considered how the video relates back to the genre of folk music or indeed the folk artist on screen. I m pleased that you have attempted to apply Goodwin's theory however your analyse must be much improved
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